Nice to meet you guys. Do you know who am I? of-course you won't know me. Let me introduce myself. My name is Fred. Today I will tell you a story that is ridiculous, but true things that have happen in my life. Well, let me start my story. Does everybody know that if you get hit by lightening, you will die? You have very little possibility to get hit by a lightening too. However, my family's older generation lost their lives because of lightening. My great grandfather was drinking beer when he came out from the beer shop, and was walking with no mind control. Suddenly, lightening hit my great grandfather and took his life. What do you think about this situation? What a unlucky guy! I was very afraid when I heard this from my mother. My father died when I was 2 years old for the same reason. The interesting thing is that lightening only stole boy's life but not women's life. After I heard this, I didn't leave my house. I quit school, I studied at home. However I didn't have enough vitamin D from the sun, I got a bacteria that almost killed me! After this situation, I went out when the sun was shining at me. However, sometimes strange things happen. It was a very sunny day, and all kinds of creatures and plants were singing and dancing. But when I came out side, it started to rain. First time I thought it was just an accident. However this strange situation was repeating and repeating. What a strange thing! As I get older, I had to go outside for my social life. But because of this strange situation, I couldn't have a social life very easily. I needed to have great courage to go outside. But if I am afraid of lightening. I would not able to live. Do you know how solved this problem?
I like your story. It was creative and the character had to face a problem and try to solve it. I liked ending 1. You should post the endings as links though like I did on my page. To learn how, visit my blog and look under the Go Blog Assignments and Creative writing section.
Nice to meet you guys. Do you know who am I? of-course you won't know me. Let me introduce myself. My name is Fred. Today I will tell you a story that is ridiculous, but true things that have happen in my life. Well, let me start my story. Does everybody know that if you get hit by lightening, you will die? You have very little possibility to get hit by a lightening too. However, my family's older generation lost their lives because of lightening. My great grandfather was drinking beer when he came out from the beer shop, and was walking with no mind control. Suddenly, lightening hit my great grandfather and took his life. What do you think about this situation? What a unlucky guy! I was very afraid when I heard this from my mother. My father died when I was 2 years old for the same reason. The interesting thing is that lightening only stole boy's life but not women's life. After I heard this, I didn't leave my house. I quit school, I studied at home. However I didn't have enough vitamin D from the sun, I got a bacteria that almost killed me! After this situation, I went out when the sun was shining at me. However, sometimes strange things happen. It was a very sunny day, and all kinds of creatures and plants were singing and dancing. But when I came out side, it started to rain. First time I thought it was just an accident. However this strange situation was repeating and repeating. What a strange thing! As I get older, I had to go outside for my social life. But because of this strange situation, I couldn't have a social life very easily. I needed to have great courage to go outside. But if I am afraid of lightening. I would not able to live. Do you know how solved this problem?
Seoung eun,
ReplyDeleteI like your story. It was creative and the character had to face a problem and try to solve it. I liked ending 1. You should post the endings as links though like I did on my page. To learn how, visit my blog and look under the Go Blog Assignments and Creative writing section.